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The poetry of pirates,
is not what one should hear,
the cuss words and the violence,
offends a gentle ear,

a shanty song is good and fine,
when sung upon the deck,
but beware son,of the brine,
its secrets and dark depth,

a mariners sad old story,
cursed by an albertross,
his quest for death or glory,
just taught his heart of loss,

the wailing of the syrens,
feel like fish hooks on the soul,
but the motion of the ocean,
can still lead you to your goal,

beware of unknown waters,
travail them with care,
the screaming and the slaughter,
caused by monsters that dwell there.
:icontronik808:
aaaarrrrr me maties, a salty old song from the ocean depths, just an old sea dogs lament to drown me sorrows in.
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:iconrockerbybaby:
Like how you tell stories with your words, & your word choice makes your rhyme scheme un-cliche :lol:
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:iconlunacy-enfolds:
I like this one the best out of the three you posted. I really like using the ocean in a lot of my own work because of its vast, powerful, and flowing personality lol. A lot of emotions can be linked to it.

But overall, I really like the difference you expressed between the light-hearted tales, and the darkness of the other side.
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~RhymeWithLime Jun 28, 2009  Student Writer
Haha, nice. I like the flow.
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~Sapient-Butterfly Mar 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice :XD:
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~AdmiralSilv Mar 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Arrrr true, true.
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